Showing posts with label short story. Show all posts
Showing posts with label short story. Show all posts

Monday, March 9, 2015

Goodbye Gold


*Here's a short story that's been floating around in my head for a few months and I finally got it out of there!!*

All she knew was that it glowed.

“Why does it do that?” she asked.

It lit up as he answered, “I don’t know.” It only happened when he spoke.

After the sun set she would sneak away from home, wrapped to shield her body from the bitter cold. He waited for her, pacing his small room, embracing when the snow yeilded her on his doorstep.

“Tell me a story,” she’d plead. It was one way to get him talking. He wove stories of birds and bears, foxes and hunters, magic and folly. She listened, rapt attention with every word, eyes trained on his arms turning from from black to gold and every color in between.

Stolen evenings spent by the fire became heated evenings spent in blankets. Wrapped in his warmth she traced the black bands ringing his limbs from elbow to forearm. Different pictures for each permanent bracelet.

She asked, “What do they mean?”

He sighed. And told a story.

“Once a boy was born from the pit of a peach,” he began. The bands began their golden dance. “He was called Momotaro.”

His voice carried the tale of Momotaro growing into a warrior, his marked arms carried the beauty of the sunrise. He told of the Peach Boy setting out on a quest to defeat a group of evil ogres. His mother made dumplings for the long journey and sent Momotaro away. Along the way Momotaro met a monkey, a dog and a pheasant. Each animal offered to help the warrior in his quest after the Peach Boy shared his precious dumplings.

“And here is the important part,” he said, his marks unglowing. Sometimes when he spoke the black would remain black. She wished they would glow always. “The pheasant flew out of reach of the ogres,” the marks took on a lazy hum of gold, “dropping rocks on their heads and alerting Momotaro of their strategies. The monkey scaled walls and moved swiftly to confuse his enemies and beat them with cunning. The dog bared his teeth, using his brute strength to overcome many an evil ogre. Momotaro fought a mighty battle but only won because of his friends.”

He took her hand in his, using her finger to trace the marks on his arm. “Loyatly and bravery go hand in hand,” the bands did not glow. “I wear the mark of the Peach Boy,” he traced their fingers over a ring of connecting circles. “He reminds me to be brave and train hard to reach my goals. The pheasant’s symbol,” he moved their hands to a ring of black feathers, “tells me I cannot always have what I want right away. The mark of the monkey,” he said, tracing a band of swirls vaguely resembling monkey tails, “reminds me to use intelligence to achieve my ends. And the dog’s symbol,” he lightly stroked their hands over a ring of different-sized squares. “The symbol of the dog tells me that sometimes force is necessary. But it is always the last resort.”

She sat, his hand covering hers, contemplating the story.

“Why are they not glowing now?” she asked.

He breathed in deeply. “I don’t know.” They glowed.

She breathed in deeply. “How did you get them?”

He sighed, then told her of a ceremony of magic, known only to his tribe.

“Can I be marked?” She asked his hands.

He lifted his hands and gently, gently, turned her face to his. “You are not of the tribe,” he said.

She looked unwaveringly into his eyes. “But I want to be.”

He tilted his face to hers, placing a breath of a kiss on her lips. “I will speak with the Shaman,” he said. The bands did not glow.

They continued their nights of stories and magic. Her sneaking away, him warming her soul. The day was just beginning when he took her hand, guiding her to the house of the Shaman.

He led her through three rings of houses settled in the snow until they came to a perfectly round structure of wood traced with gold. Inside were walls of gold and black woven tapestries and a withered old woman marked from finger to forehead.

“You wish to be marked?” the Shaman rasped. Her symbols did not glow.

She nodded. The Shaman began. Spices filled the air, chants filled her head, needles pricked her skin and she was marked. Feathers. The pheasant to see all, lining her forearm.

“You are pleased?” the Shaman rasped. Her symbols did not glow.

She nodded. He led her away from the Shaman, back to her home. He would see her tomorrow.  She was marked of the tribe.

She entered the house of her parents happy.

“Is that you?” came her mother’s voice from the kitchen.

She lifted the sleeve of her clothing, watching her mark as she said, “Yes, mama!” The mark did not glow.

“You’re late today. Where have you been?” said the pleasant voice of her mother.

“Nowhere,” she answered, nearly laughing as the black faded into gold.

“Well, what were you doing?” accused her mother’s voice. She moved to the door of the kitchen, keeping her arm hidden behind a wall to watch the mark.

“Nothing,” she replied, watching the mark light up as she spoke, an idea forming in her mind.

“Mama,” she began. “How would you feel if I dated a boy from the tribes?” The mark did not glow.

Her mother scoffed, “Darling are you seeing someone?”

“No,” she lied. The mark glowed.

“Mama,” she began again. “I went to school today,” she lied. The mark glowed.

“Well, that’s wonderful, dear, but I want to hear more about this boy,” said her mother’s voice.

Eyes wide, she lied again, “There is no boy.” The mark glowed.

“Then why,” her mother’s exasperated voice chided, “would you bring up a boy?”

Her voice trembled as she said, “Just curious.” The mark glowed.

Her mother looked at her for a long moment. “Ok, then, dinner will be ready in thirty minutes. Would you like to help?”

“No, mama” her voice quavered. The mark did not glow.

“Are you alright?” her mother asked.

“Yes, Mama,” she lied. In that moment she knew why she was marked with the pheasant to see all.

In that moment she knew why the marks glowed.

In that moment gold became an ugly color.

Thursday, January 1, 2015

Nicole's New Year's Resolution

I write. I don't exactly call myself a writer because I've never finished anything worthy of publication and don't know if I ever will. But I try. And this year, for my 2015 New Year's Resolution I am going to try to write more. And more regularly. And I'm going to share it with you. So be warned: All the stories I share will be, for the most part, unedited. They will be works of flash fiction that I create each month in order to keep the creative juices flowing. Some I will want to develop into novels at some future point when I have time to do that. Others will begin and end on this blog. You are encouraged to comment, critique or bash any of my works. I am a harsh critic and expect no less from anyone else. So here is my first story of the New Year. It's actually more serious than most things I write but it's what was in my head at the time. I'd love to know what you think. Happy reading (I hope).
Meet the Devil With a Smile
Sweat slicked my hand as I pulled Stuart into a narrow hallway. Turning a corner, darkness covered us so immediately and so completely that I jerked to a stop. Stuart plowed right into me, knocking us both into a wall.

“Ow!” he stage whispered in my ear, cursing.

“Shh, shh, shh!” I hushed him, ears trained on the passage we just escaped. Distant footfalls echoed to us. Closing my eyes, I gauged their distance. Which was an extremely difficult task after just running through labrynthine tunnels. An image of people made of mud with the heads of jaguars jerked my eyes open.

I barely breathed the words, “Keep moving,” as I turned to trace my hands on the wall. Stuart grabbed the hem of my shirt with one hand, the other joined mine on the wall, searching.

We made our way slowly, taking another turn, growing ever-more dark. What I wouldn’t give for one of those sun lamps right now. All the mud-figures had them, toting them on staffs, holding their mini-suns aloft to light the way in the ancient tunnels. A gift from the Sun God for his creatures.

“I wonder if the others got out,” Stuart whispered behind me, so close, his breath froze the sweat beading on the back of my neck. I shivered. The others. There were—had been—five of us. I pictured Angie laughing, daring us to go inside the nearly-hidden doorway at the back of the Pyramid of the Sun. Who would have thought anything dangerous could be protected behind a weak plastic chain? If there had been some barbed wire or something I would have thought it through a little more. But I never could resist a dare. Especially after Stuart jumped the chain, challenging me to follow. Then so did Angie, Paul and Katy. All of us laughing. Meeting the devil with a smile. No, not a devil; A God.

“I mean, you think they’re okay?” He swore again, his whispers gaining volume. I was going to tell him to be quiet but he spoke over me, “I can’t believe this. You know, I didn’t even know Mexico had pyramids before this trip. Why would they? The only ones you ever hear about are in Egypt. And they’ve got all their own Gods and crap, I can’t hardly wrap my head around it.” He was babbling, his voice more talking than whispering and gaining momentum. I could feel his panic rising. And mine with it.

“Hey,” I said, placing my hand over his on the wall. Both our hands cold and clammy, despite being the middle of summer. We stood still, my hand staying his tongue. I wished I could see his face, reassure him with the look in my eyes. Actually, no, I don’t wish that; I probably looked wild and scared-stupid at the moment. Better that it was nearly pitch-black and we couldn’t see each other at all.

“Hey,” I said again, giving his figures a squeeze. “We’ll be okay. The others will be okay. We’ll get out of here and we’ll go home.” I waited. Hoped. His breathing slowed, the the distant thump thump of mud-figure footsteps growing closer. “Let’s just keep moving, okay?”

There was a silent moment where he may have nodded. “Okay,” he agreed.

I tried to pull my hand away to search the walls but Stuart twisted his fingers to intertwine with mine, holding tight. I felt the fear in his grip. We moved quickly, quietly. One palm grazed the surface of the wall, the other held Stuart’s sanity together. We turned another corner. I thought we might be going in a square, leading us out to the main hallway again but the dark grew denser, heavier. And then the hall ended.

I stopped, ran my hand around the wall. The sides were smooth. In front of us, where the path should have continued, was rough. And the only way out was back the way we came. I felt Stuart drop my hand, frantically search the walls. The space was so small, I could feel him and a wall at any given time.

“There’s—“ he whispered, shocked. “There’s no way out.” I felt him spin, heard his hand skimming the sides. “We can’t get out!” His voice rose in panic. I stood, rooted to ground. No idea what to do. “It’s like—It’s like they never finished this tunnel. They got it started but didn’t finish it! Where’s the tunnel, Carla?” His mouth spewed a steady stream of curses, growing louder. “Carla!” He reached out, grabbing hold of my forearm, following that up to my shoulder. Spinning me to face him, he put both hands on my shoulders. I could just barely make out his silhouette in the gloom. “Carla, what do we do? We can’t go back out, they’re almost here,” I could feel his breath on my nose. “We have no where to go, we’re stuck, we…” he kept babbling, building himself into a frenzy. He was right. There was nothing we could do. We were stuck. But we weren’t necessarily found. If we just kept quiet maybe no one would come down this dead-end hallway. Maybe they didn’t even notice this hall since it was so useless. But we had to be quiet to hide. And Stuart was building up to the opposite.

“Stuart,” I tried to interrupt but he continued on with his monolog, unfazed. “Stuart,” I placed my hand on his chest. He was breathing like he’d just run a marathon, his fingers digging into my shoulders. But he didn’t stop talking. He really needed to stop talking.

“Stuart,” I slid my hand up to his face, feeling the slightest hint of stubble. Tilting my head, I placed my lips on his. He froze. We stood there, two statues, lips touching. It was so dark I didn’t even think to close my eyes.

After a long moment I pulled away. Stuart resumed breathing. I felt his forehead lean into mine. Standing nose to nose, we listened as muddy feet shuffled nearby. Stuart’s hands slid down my back, settling around my waist. I was too afraid to move. The sound of mud-figures walking was steady but no longer growing louder. I could hardly breathe. Which was why I flinched when Stuart whispered into my ear, barely audible, “I know you just did that to shut me up.”

He shouldn’t have been talking with the mud-figures so nearby. I shook my head to tell him so.

“No?” His arms tightened around me, misunderstanding. “Good,” he breathed. “”Cause I’ve kinda had this thing for you since Texas when you gunned that orange soda at the airport,” I shook my head again. He really shouldn’t be talking. “Yeah, yeah,” he continued. “First of all, I don’t know why the vending machine had orange soda at all, like five people drink it. Me included. I love that stuff.“ I nodded yes, hoping to shut him up. He chuckled softly, at which I shook my head. Vigorously. “For real, my favorite flavor. But you guzzled it like nothing I’ve ever seen.”

I really had nothing to say to that comment. Why my being able to drink an entire can of orange soda in one long slurp would be attractive was a mystery to me. Most people thought it was kind of gross. Especially my mom who told me how disgusting and unattractive my beverage habits were at every available opportunity.

“I know this a bad time,” I stopped moving completely at that statement. If only he could have seen the understatement-of-the-year look I was giving him. “But you started it,” he moved so there was no space between us. “And if I’m about to die—“ I shook my head again, not ready to examine that possibility. Not ready to allow that word into my thoughts. And then his mouth was on mine. But this time it was more than just lips touching. This was kissing.

Stuart pulled me closer, breathed me in. My hands hovered somewhere near his chest too petrified to participate. I vaguely heard footsteps growing fainter. Or maybe the blood pulsing through my ears made everything else faint. Mud-figures could find us at any moment. Their dead stares and animal heads sent to drag us back to the sacrifice room. There was nothing we could do. This was possibly the last few minutes of my life.

Then why not enjoy the moment?

My arms wound around his neck, my body bowing into his. I threw everything I had into that kiss. Stuart gasped in response. The sound should have startled me but I figured it was better than talking. I gave in to all my fear, all my hope, all my anxiety, adrenaline and longing. If I hadn’t been making out I would have been crying.

Stuart pulled back, gulping breaths. “Whoa,” he panted. “About-to-die kissing is so much better than regular kissing.”

Smiling into the darkness, I guided him back down to me. I almost didn’t even care that he said “about-to-die kissing” instead of “kissing you”.

I don’t know how long we stayed in that dead-ended tunnel in almost complete darkness. But I do know that when we finally made our way out of there my face was glowing so brightly it could have been its’ own sun lamp.

One hand trailed the wall, guiding us back to the main passageway, my other hand linked with Stuart’s. The mud-figures were long gone, crumbling footprints left in their wake. The faint glow of a sun lamp high up on a wall lit the corridor as I turned my head around the corner. Nothing there. I turned back to Stuart, grinning. He smiled. We stepped silently into the hall together.

A sun lamp flared, casting giant shadows around us. Spots hovered in my vision, eyes squinting against the onslaught of brightness.

“Here they are,” said a voice behind the light.

Monday, December 8, 2014

Let It Snow by Maureen Johnson, John Green and Lauren Myracle

Sparkling white snowdrifts, beautiful presents wrapped in ribbons, and multicolored lights glittering in the night through the falling snow. A Christmas Eve snowstorm transforms one small town into a romantic haven, the kind you see only in movies. Well, kinda. After all, a cold and wet hike from a stranded train through the middle of nowhere would not normally end with a delicious kiss from a charming stranger. And no one would think that a trip to the Waffle House through four feet of snow would lead to love with an old friend. Or that the way back to true love begins with a painfully early morning shift at Starbucks. Thanks to three of today’s bestselling teen authors—John Green, Maureen Johnson, and Lauren Myracle—the magic of the holidays shines on these hilarious and charming interconnected tales of love, romance, and breathtaking kisses.

My Thoughts:

A YA Christmas book! Yay! This book is actually three different stories, told by three different authors, about a bunch of inter-connecting people who get stuck in a huge snow storm. Since they're three different stories I feel like I have to review them separately.

Maureen Johnson's story, The Jubilee Express, was pretty hilarious. It took me a couple of pages to get into the voice of Jubilee but once I found her voice I loved it! She was quirkily adorable. And sweet and fun. Jubilee's story begins with her parents getting tossed in jail on Christmas Eve. Her suburban, nice, normal, law-abiding parents. For fighting over ceramics. Right off the bat this story is funny. And it just keeps getting crazier. Until Jubilee meets a boy at a Waffle House and decides to accept his offer when he asks her to go home with him. I mean, everything turned out fine, but just the fact that she was willing to go home with some random guy she'd known for two minutes rubbed me the wrong way. Not a good message to send young girls. Anyway, Jubilee has every reason to be depressed and weird on Christmas because nothing is working out the way she wanted it to. And, yeah, she has her pity-party moments but mostly she's entertaining. She moves a little too quickly for me from one guy to the next, but it is a short story. And it's cute. And clean. And I grinned a lot while reading it.

John Green's A Cheertastic Christmas Miracle was my favorite of the three. I just love the way he writes! I'm gonna have to read some more John Green books. This story follows three best friends who are hanging out together on Christmas Eve who get a call from another friend asking them to drive through a snowstorm to come hang out with him and a bunch of cheerleaders. Everything was just so funny! All the dialog was hilarious and witty. I liked the characters. I mean, I really liked the characters. I wanted to hang out with them. I want to be friends with fictional characters. Or maybe just with John Green, who is a real person. We could be buddies. Anyway, I loved this storyline. Everything progressed perfectly, characters were believable. The plot was silly, of course, but fun. And I want these characters as friends.

Lauren Myracle's The Patron Saint of Pigs was my least favorite. If not for this third story, the book probably would have gotten four stars. I've read one book by Lauren Myracle and hated it. Hated! Loathed, even. It was really bad. This wasn't that bad but I'm still not a Myracle fan. Her writing is just so whiney. The main character was a horribly selfish, foolish, immature person. I really didn't like her at all. Things are over-explained. There's lots of info-dumping. This story has all the characters from the other stories meeting up somehow at the end, which is kind of nice, only I wish a different author would have done it because Myracle just doesn't do them justice. I didn't like this storyline. Nothing happens here except for Addie re-hashing her failed relationship and being annoyingly stupid and whiney. I thought all of Myracle's characters were dumb. I skimmed through most of this story because it was just so bad.

So definitely read this book if you're into clean, sweet, contemporary YA romance novels set at Christmas time. The first two stories are just so cute. I loved them! The third, you have my permission to skip. There's no real reason to read it. Merry Christmas!

Sexual Content: Mild
Language: Moderate
Violence: Mild
Drugs/Alcohol: Mild

Saturday, December 6, 2014

The Curiosities: A Collection of Stories by Maggie Stiefvater, Brenna Yovanoff and Tessa Gratton

From acclaimed YA authors Maggie Stiefvater, Tessa Gratton, and Brenna Yovanoff comes The Curiosities: A Collection of Stories.

- A vampire locked in a cage in the basement, for good luck.
- Bad guys, clever girls, and the various reasons why the guys have to stop breathing.
- A world where fires never go out (with references to vanilla ice cream).

These are but a few of the curiosities collected in this volume of short stories by three acclaimed practitioners of paranormal fiction.

But The Curiosities is more than the stories. Since 2008, Maggie, Tessa, and Brenna have posted more than 250 works of short fiction to their website merryfates.com. Their goal was simple: create a space for experimentation and improvisation in their writing—all in public and without a backspace key. In that spirit, The Curiosities includes the stories and each author's comments, critiques, and kudos in the margins. Think of it as a guided tour of the creative processes of three acclaimed authors.

So, are you curious now?


My Thoughts:

I don't think I could pinpoint exactly what I loved about this collection. But I loved it. I think I might be kind of a Brenna Yovanoff fangirl. Seriously. I love her. And her work. It's just... so... perfect. I picked up this collection of stories because of her and I'm so glad I did because I now have more authors to obsess over!

Ok, so, this collection of short stories exists because three unknown authors (Brenna Yovanoff, Maggie Stiefvater and Tessa Gratton) started a blog on which to post short stories and critique each other. Using this blog they each honed their already impressive skills and are now some of the best YA fiction writers out there. The really awesome thing about this anthology, though, was that it was published unedited and with notes in the margins explaining creative processes and how they critiqued each other and what-not. So it was interesting in a one-day-I'd-like-to-write-a-book sort of way. But the stories themselves were just good on their own. Which is amazing to me, considering that they each wrote a story a week. Granted, they did pick and choose which stories were going to be published and I'm sure a lot of not-so-stellar pieces were cut but I'm still amazed by what they could do with such crazy deadlines! A full short story a week! Talk about dedication to your craft.

Anyway, the stories. Usually I get a bit bored by a book that is a collection of disjointed stories with no connection to each other to speak of. Here, I was fascinated. I could not put this down. It's like I got a full novel every few pages, these stories were so rich and rounded. The subjects were ones I was interested in, that I craved to read. The characters were people I knew and liked or was interested enough in to want to know about them. I'm not gonna lie, there's a lot of weirdness going on in here. I think that's part of the reason these three talented ladies work so well together in this critique circle: Their talents complement each other and their subject matter tends to be similar. I loved all the weirdness. There are ghosts and trolls and zombies and magic and killer puddles and murderers and modern dragon slayers and pyromaniacs and all sorts of fun, strange little things going on. And the actual writing is so, so lovely. 

Now that I'm not looking at the book itself I'm having a hard time remembering which author wrote what. Which is a good thing. Because I picked this book up loving Brenna Yovanoff's words.

Now I think I might be in love with Maggie Stiefvater's and Tessa Gratton's as well.

Sexual Content: Mild (kissing, vague innuendo)
Language: Mild
Violence: Moderate
Drugs/Alcohol: Mild